Thanks for the draft !
I have a few comments/questions:
1) Change to 7.5.1: by changing “offside” to “a false start”, there is now no rule that explains how to resolve when the defense calls offside. That seems like a mistake to me.
2) Change to 18.1.4: Am I correct to understand that the only effect this has is to enable non-markers to call a double team violation, or are there other effects I’m missing ?
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